2022年6月4日雅思大作文真题：

It's more important for school children to learn about their local history than world history. To what extent do you agree or disagree？对学生来说，学习当地历史比学习世界历史更重要。你同意或不同意？

01 题目解析

6月4日考的是教育+历史+文化类的题目，这种类型的话题其实不难，跟考察语言类的话题核心讨论内容是差不多的，无论是历史、语言、旅游、全球化，内核其实都在于文化交流的重要性的讨论。

题目问：“对于学生来说，学习本国历史比学习世界历史更重要吗？”在老师看来其实不然，在现在这个全球化发展的时代，世界历史也很重要，他们是一样重要的，所以老师选择的立场是disagree，下面我们一起来看看范文：

02 高分范文

Some people argue that it is more significant for school children to study local history rather than international history. As far as I am concerned, I disagree with this view. I think they hold equal value, and thus we should attach equal importance to them.

段落解析

首段分析：题目同义复述+题目问题回应

词汇表达：attach equal importance to...  同等重视...

范文translation：一些人认为，对学生来说，学习当地历史比学习国际历史更重要。就我而言，我不同意这种观点。我认为它们的价值是相等的，因此我们应该同等重视它们。

On the one hand, learning about local history can have a variety of benefits for students. Firstly, history, as part of culture, is the spiritual backbone of a nation. Through learning history, students can appreciate the culture of their country, as well as the history of its development, so that they can understand their nation better. In other words, studying local history can deepen their understanding of the past of their country. As a result, they build a sense of responsibility to their country and develop a strong sense of cultural identity. Furthermore, studying local history makes children proud of their national culture. When communicating with friends abroad, they will become more confident and voluble.

段落解析

本段讨论学习local history的重要性。

词汇表达：

the spiritual backbone of a nation 民族精神支柱

build a sense of responsibility 树立责任感

develop a strong sense of cultural identity 培养强烈的文化认同感

voluble  健谈的

范文translation：一方面，学习当地历史对学生有很多好处。首先，历史作为文化的一部分，是一个民族的精神支柱。通过学习历史，学生可以欣赏自己国家的文化，以及它的发展历史，从而更好地了解自己的民族。换句话说，学习当地历史可以加深他们对本国历史的了解。因此，他们对自己的国家建立了一种责任感，培养了一种强烈的文化认同感。此外，学习当地历史使孩子们为他们的民族文化感到骄傲。在国外与朋友交流时，他们会变得更加自信和健谈。

On the other hand, the knowledge of international history is also vital for students. In this globalised age, people have witnessed an ever-increasing exchange of cultures between countries. The best way to be aware of the cultures of different countries is to learn about their history. By studying international history, students can get to know people in various countries, what they believe in, how they lead their daily life, and their traditions and customs. What’s more, students can absorb novel things from international history. Therefore, students will become inclusive because they have learned cultural differences and accepted the diversity of the world. International history broadens their mind.

段落解析

本段讨论学习 international history的重要性。

词汇表达： 

witness 见证

absorb novel things 吸收新事物

Inclusive 包容的

范文translation：另一方面，国际历史知识对学生也很重要。在这个全球化的时代，各国之间的文化交流日益频繁。了解不同国家文化的最好方法是了解他们的历史。通过学习国际历史，学生可以了解不同国家的人，他们的信仰，他们的日常生活，他们的传统和习俗。更重要的是，学生可以从国际历史中吸收新奇的事物。因此，学生们会变得具有包容性，因为他们了解了文化的差异，接受了世界的多样性。国际历史开阔了他们的视野。

To sum up, world history education affords children the chance to attain cultural literacy on a world scale, which is not inferior to the teaching of local history.

段落解析

总结段重述自己的立场，不需要提出新观点。

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