2022.5.28雅思大作文解析及高分范文:减少使用汽车和摩托车的措施

2022-06-02 17:07:43 发布 来源:雷哥雅思

2022年5月28日雅思大作文真题:

Many people continue to use cars and motorcycles even though they know that they are bad for environment. Why is this? What can be done to reduce the use of these vehicles? 

许多人继续使用汽车和摩托车,即使他们知道它们对环境有害。这是为什么呢?可以采取什么措施来减少这些车辆的使用?

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01 雅思大作文题目解析

 这一次雅思大作文没有继续考察议论文(agree or disagree或discuss both these views and give your own opinion),这次考察的是相对比较简单的说明文,问题也是最常规的一类:原因+解决措施

 

为什么说相对简单呢,因为不需要我们提炼论点嘛,相对来讲对辩证思维的要求不高,只需讲明原因和措施即可,通常主体段部分为:1段原因+1段措施 / 2段原因+1段措施


下面,我们具体讲下这道题目,首先是注意正确审题:这一题让同学们说明的是“许多人继续使用汽车和摩托车,即使他们知道它们对环境有害”的原因和措施,正确回应这道题目有两点需要注意:

 

1.题目需要同学们针对的主体是cars and motorcycles,千万不能只提cars;

2.写解决措施的时候不能再说加强人们的环保意识了,因为题目都说了人们知道会污染环境但是依旧还是选择继续使用汽车和摩托车,那再提环保意识对这题来讲就没意义了。

 

然后我们看下思路:


原因:1. 汽车和摩托车使人们的休闲娱乐生活 (购物,交友,旅游等) 更加自由且方便;2. 城镇的扩张,越来越多的人住在远离工作地点的地方。如果他们想准时上班,开车上班是最可靠、最有效的选择之一;3. 人们的收入水平一直在提高,尤其是在城镇。因此,更多的城市家庭能够负担得起汽车或者摩托车,以及维修费用;

 

措施:1. 改善城市居民的公共交通服务;2. 使汽车或摩托车的使用更加昂贵和不方便。

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02 雅思大作文高分范文

Even though people have realize that the emissions of cars and motorcycles have adverse effects on environment, they still choose to use these vehicles constantly.This essay will discuss the reasons for this situation and suggest some solutions.

 

段落解析

首段分析:题目同义复述+题目问题回应

这里题目的问题回应比较固定,同学们可以记下来,只要问原因和措施,即可用这句话回应“This essay will discuss the reasons for this situation and suggest some solutions.”


词汇表达:

emissions 排放物  

adverse不利的,有害的


范文translation:即使人们已经意识到汽车和摩托车的排放对环境的负面影响,他们仍然会选择持续地使用这些车辆。本文将探讨造成这种情况的原因,并提出一些解决办法。

 

The primary reason for this case is that cars and motorcycles make people’s life more convenient. They can move freely for leisure activities such as shopping, visiting friends and travelling without depending on fixed schedules of public transportation systems or waiting for the bus in the cold or on the burning sun. Also, more people live far away from their workplace due to the expansion of cities and towns. Driving to work is one of the most reliable and efficient choices that they have if they want to arrive at work on time. Another cause is that people's income levels have been rising, especially in cities and towns. Therefore, more urban families can afford a car or motorcycles and the maintenance costs.

 

段落解析

本段讨论原因,使用句式框架:The primary reason for this case is that...;Also,...;Another cause is that...


词汇表达:

leisure activities 休闲活动

fixed schedules 固定的时间表

public transportation 公共交通

expansion 扩张

income levels 薪资水平

maintenance costs 维修费用


范文translation:发生这种情况的主要原因是汽车和摩托车使人们的生活更加方便。他们可以自由地进行购物、访友、旅行等休闲活动,不需要依赖固定的公共交通系统时间表,也不需要在寒冷或烈日下等公交车。此外,由于城镇的扩张,越来越多的人住在远离工作地点的地方。如果他们想准时上班,开车上班是最可靠、最有效的选择之一。另一个原因是人们的收入水平一直在提高,尤其是在城镇。因此,更多的城市家庭能够负担得起汽车或者摩托车,以及维修费用。


There are various measures that can be taken to address this problem.Firstly, Governments need to improve public transport services available to city dwellers, especially commuters. For example, by providing convenient and reliable bus services, governments can reduce people's dependence on their cars or motorcycles. Public transport that is more comfortable retains its passengers, much like any business that satisfies its customers. Another way to stimulate public transport use is to make cars or motorcycles use more expensive and inconvenient. The introduction of tolls along urban motorways has been successfully employed in many cities. Other such measures are high-priced permits for parking in urban areas and the restriction of parking to a limited number of cars and motorcycles. Faced with high costs or no place to park, commuters would perhaps be more willing to abandon these vehicles in favour of buses or trains.

 

段落解析

本段讨论措施,使用句式框架:There are various measures that can be taken to address this problem. Firstly...;Another way to do... is to do...

 

词汇表达:

city dwellers 城市居民

commuters 通勤者

toll 道路通行费

high-priced permits 高价的停车许可证

 

范文translation:有各种各样的措施可以用来解决这个问题。首先,政府需要改善城市居民的公共交通服务,尤其是通勤者。例如,通过提供方便可靠的公共汽车服务,政府可以减少人们对汽车或摩托车的依赖。更舒适的公共交通留住了乘客,就像任何让顾客满意的生意一样。另一种刺激公共交通使用的方法是使汽车或摩托车的使用更加昂贵和不方便。城市高速公路收费制度已在许多城市成功实施。其他此类措施包括在城市地区收取高价的停车许可证,以及将停车限制在有限数量的汽车和摩托车。面对高成本或没有停车的地方,通勤者可能更愿意放弃这些车辆,而选择公共汽车或火车。

 

In summary, there are several causes of this problem. Various steps need to be taken to tackle the problem, such as improving public transport services and making cars and motorcycles use more costly and less convenient.

 

段落解析

总结段依旧是对两个问题做回应,并作简要概括。


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