2022.5.12雅思大作文解析及高分范文:记录生活的方式

2022-05-18 09:55:55 发布 来源:雷哥雅思 阅读量:2626

2022年5月12日雅思大作文真题:

Some people believe using the modern technology (digital photographs, blogs) is the best way to record and remember important personal events. Others think the traditional method (making photo albums, writing diaries)is better. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 

有些人认为使用现代技术(数码照片、博客)是记录个人重要事件的最佳方式。其他人则认为传统的方法(制作相册、写日记)更好。讨论两种观点并给出你自己的观点。

 

01 雅思大作文题目解析

这一次的雅思大作文题目其实还蛮有趣的,是关于电子相册、博客VS传统相册、日记的,现在这两种记录生活的方式都是广泛存在的。

 

在老师看来,虽然网络技术发展很快,但是手写文字的感觉,带着岁月的痕迹,陈旧的老照片的味道是Internet永远无法给予的,这一点写字好看和怀旧的同学应该是额外有体会的。

 

而电子相册我觉得是比较适合追星的小伙伴儿,可以加一些音乐,一些特效,发在网上比较吸引眼球,也可以给偶像宣传,如果是个人的话,虽然也可以,但是不利于人与人的面对面沟通,无论是家庭聚会还是朋友聚会,其实拿出一本纸质的相册大家会更静的下心来翻看,然后聊聊往事。

 

这是老师的看法,当然也有同学会觉得电子相册可以在网络上展示自己,网友的点赞和关注会带给自己快乐也是可以写的,下面一起来看看老师这种思路的雅思大作文范文哦:


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02 雅思大作文高分范文

Recently, people have different views about whether it is the best way to record and remember important personal events in an electronic form. In my opinion, while digital photographs or blogs allow easy storage and editing, I would argue that pen-and-ink diaries and traditional photo albums are still the optimal choice for some people who like writing and those who value them as souvenirs, gifts, or even works of art.

 

段落解析:

首段分析:运用whether句式对题目进行同义复述,并用让步句式来表达写作立场。

词汇表达:

pen-and-ink diaries 手写日记

value… as…将…珍视为…

范文translation:最近,人们对用电子形式记录和记忆重要的个人事件是否是最好的方式有不同的看法。在我看来,虽然数码照片或博客可以方便地存储和编辑,但我认为手写日记和传统相册仍然是一些喜欢写作的人,以及那些把它们当作纪念品、礼物甚至艺术品的人的最佳选择。

 

On the one hand, with the popularity of digital cameras and scanners, the number of digital photos in the family is increasing, and accordingly, there are a lot of software for making electronic photo albums. Admittedly, compared with traditional photo albums, the electronic albums have many advantages: the expression technique of picture, text, sound and image, the function of editing at will, the fast retrieval method, the permanent preservation characteristic of never fading, and the superior means of cheap copy and distribution. However, traditional photo albums, as a physical object, are more suitable for friends or family members to look through together, recall many pleasant memories of the past, and strengthen the bond of friendship or kinship. Furthermore, they are also more friendly to the elderly.

 

段落解析:

本段以让步的形式,在分析电子相册的优缺点的同时,强调了对于传统相册的好感。

词汇表达:

physical object 实物

recall 回忆

strengthen the bond 加强联系

范文translation:一方面,随着数码相机和扫描仪的普及,家庭中数码照片的数量越来越多,因此,有很多软件可以制作电子相册。诚然,与传统相册相比,电子相册有许多优势:图片、文字、声音和图像的表达技术,随意编辑的功能,快速检索的方法,永不褪色的永久保存的特点,以及廉价复制和发行的优越手段。而传统的相册作为一种实物,更适合朋友或家人一起翻阅,回忆过去的许多美好回忆,增进友情或亲情的联系。此外,他们对老年人也更友好。

 

On the other hand, nowadays, people choose to post about their daily life and work on blogs in increasing numbers. They keep blogs to note down what happens to them, to describe their emotions and feelings, and to express opinions on current affairs. Blogs do not only provide an outlet for people’s inner feelings like traditional diaries, but also provide a channel through which young people can communicate with one another. However, people may spend too much time on their blogs, trying hard to win clicks and replies. Therefore, both their academic work and their everyday interpersonal relationships may suffer. By contrast, writing diaries are private, which are conducive to self-communication and self-psychological adjustment. Another element that makes people cannot abandon the traditional diaries is the feelings. People enjoy the feelings when they write on a piece of paper and smell the sweet-smell of the ink. These little romantic feelings cannot be provided by blogs.

 

段落解析

本段主要讨论了博客的优缺点,之后对比出手写日记的好处。

词汇表达:

outlet (情感或思想)发泄的出口

self-communication and self-psychological adjustment 自我沟通和心理调节

范文translation:另一方面,如今,越来越多的人选择在博客上发布他们的日常生活和工作。他们写博客是为了记录发生在自己身上的事情,描述自己的情绪和感受,并表达对时事的看法。博客不仅像传统的日记一样为人们提供了一个抒发内心感受的渠道,也为年轻人提供了一个相互交流的渠道。然而,人们可能会花太多的时间在他们的博客上,努力赢得点击和回复。因此,他们的学业和日常人际关系可能会受到影响。相反,写日记是私密的,有利于自我交流和自我心理调节。另一个让人无法抛弃传统日记的因素是感觉。人们喜欢在纸上写字的感觉,还能闻到墨水的香味。这些小小的浪漫感受是博客无法提供的。


In conclusion, I think the traditional method to record and remember meaningful personal events is still better.


段落解析

最后一段对全篇文章做总结,并重申自己的观点看法。

范文translation:总之,我认为传统的方法来记录和记忆有意义的个人事件仍然是更好的。

  

整篇文章采用总分总结构。首段表明立场,中间分两段讨论双方观点,最后一段重述观点。

 

本文作者:申友雅思Sofia老师,添加微信,立即咨询Sofia老师雅思大作文写作课程:cdb03499756


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