雅思小作文是比较套路化的, 只需要paraphrase题目就可以了, 但是切忌照抄!

关于如何paraphrase, 下面给同学们简单介绍一些基础的方法:

1. 近义词替换:

这是比较基础的方法, 也是要求最低的.

一般必须也最好替换的是这几个词: 表格形式, 动词

比如表格形式: 用chart, graph, diagram, line graph 之间熟练转化

比如动词: 原文是give information, 换成 illustrate, shows…

2. 具体化或者概化：

根据原文内容, 灵活运用

比如原文是fish and some different kinds of meat, 那么在改写的时候, 就可以具体化, 写成, beef, lamb, chicken and fish

3. 位置互换:

这个对学生的能力要求比较高,  原文是consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat, 那么就该写成beef, lamb, chicken and fish consumed

当然在具体的应用中, 我们需要灵活的运用这些方法，下面是几个简单的例子

1. 题目: The chart below shows the different levels of post-school qualification in Australia and the proportion of men and women who held them in 1999.

改写: The chart gives information about post-school qualifications in terms of the different levels of further education reached by men and women in Australia in 1999.

用gives information来代替show;

post-school qualifications不变, 把different levels后置, 改成in terms of the different levels of further education, 其中further education是新增的附加信息

2. 题目: The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004. 

改写: The graph illustrates changes in the amounts of beef, lamb, chicken and fish consumed in a particular European country between 1979 and 2004.

用illustrate来代替show;

用the amounts of beef, lamb, chicken and fish consumed来代替the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat, 其中把consumption后置, 并且细化some different kinds of meat, 把它具体到详细的beef, lamb, chicken

3. 题目: The three pie charts below show the changes in annual spending by a particular UK school in 1981, 1991 and 2001.

改写: The charts show how much a UK school spent on different running costs in three separate years: 1981, 1991 and 2001.

用spent on different running costs代替annual spending, 同时替换了语序, 由原来的annual spending by a particular UK, 换成了a UK school spent on different running costs

4. 题目: The pie charts below shows units of electricity production by fuel source in Australia and France in 1980 and 2000.

改写: The charts compare the sources of electricity in Australia and France in the year 1980 and 2000.

用sources of electricity 来代替units of electricity production by fuel source