小作文主体段常用句式 静态数据读排篇
2018-12-29 15:38:10 发布 来源:雷哥雅思一) 百分比句式转换
* 以“60个学生中,有6个人喜欢音乐”为例。
1) 数据置前
1. 10 % of students like music.
2. There are 10 % of students who love music.
2) 数据置后
3. The percentage/ proportion of the students who love music is 10 %.
4. Students who like music take up 10 % of the total.
二) 数据形式转换
1. 10 % of students like music. (百分数)
2. 6 out of the 60 students like music. (数字)
3. A tenth of the students like music. (分数)
4. Only a few students like music. (概数)
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友情提示很多情况下,百分比句式的变化还需要对句意进行灵活的表达来实现。
* 饼图例 (PrimarySource ofInformation forCollegeStudents)
试用多种句式改写:
Newspapers were the primary source of information for 21% of the students.
(请关注以下各句中以黑体字标出的“词à词”及“词à表达”的同义替换。)
1. Newspapers were themajorsource of information for 21% of the students.
2. 21% of studentsgot most of their informationfrom newspapers.
3. 21% of students read newspapersto get most of their information.
4. For 21% of the students,most of the information came fromnewspapers.
5. For 21% of the students, reading newspapers wasthe majorway toget information.
三) 排序表达
1)最机械的模板 (三个最大值+三个最小值)
According to the chart/ table, it is obvious that the biggest part was A, which accounted for m % of all.
B was the next largest proportion with n %, followed by C (x %).
The above three items took up about a % (前三大值的总和) of the total.
By contrast, D, E, F made up a small percentage of the total, which were p %, q % and r % respectively.
2)原创句式
l最大值
1. A ranked first, which accounted for m %.
2. A was the leading + n., accounting for m %.
3. A covered the largest/ biggest share with m %.
l第二、第三大值
1. Next came B with n %, which was followed by C (x % ).
2. B came next with n %, followed by C (x %).
l中间值
1. D and E were/ lay in the middle with p % and q % respectively.
l最小值
1. X lay last with n %.
2. X had the smallest share which accounted for n %.
3. The remaining (剩下的) n % went to X.
友情提示请特别关注在以上排序句式中“嵌入百分比数据”的方法。
1. ..., which accounted for m %
2. ..., accounting for m %
3.with m%
4.括号